Sam, Good start to your year-long English blog. You have a great topic for a position research paper. Your last question is too weak, since you can answer it with one number. You might look for something about when should coaches stop playing students with head injuries or who is liable for student athlete injuries? There must be some very interesting arguments on both sides, especially for football and cheerleading. You are missing one important blog post and that is your Research Topic paragraph and seven key terms. You need to correct a few things. Look at your sub-title and fix English. Make sure you use upper case I when you mean you. Also, you need question marks after your first questions. Lastly, underline book titles. 80/100
Sam,
ReplyDeleteGood start to your year-long English blog. You have a great topic for a position research paper. Your last question is too weak, since you can answer it with one number. You might look for something about when should coaches stop playing students with head injuries or who is liable for student athlete injuries? There must be some very interesting arguments on both sides, especially for football and cheerleading. You are missing one important blog post and that is your Research Topic paragraph and seven key terms. You need to correct a few things. Look at your sub-title and fix English. Make sure you use upper case I when you mean you. Also, you need question marks after your first questions. Lastly, underline book titles.
80/100